by Unverzagt
Loved the realistic detail & the depth of your characters. Took me straight back to my awkward, horny college days!
You got me with two of my favorites... being watched jerking off and exploring M/M bi-curiosity, especially with a female present. Nicely written with some "character development"which gave it a touch of realism that was arousing. I've written on the JO theme on Lit too.
Hoping to hear of more adventures the trio.......Rick and you while drew watches you in 69 maybe?
I love this one. What a great story to fantasize and jack off to. I'm hard and stroking now! .... mmm...ooh yeah! ...spurt...spurt...spurt!!!
I love being watched as I masturbate. This story is one of the best written on that topic. It had me 100% hard and dripping with pre cum. Please keep writing.
I appreciate the comments, good and bad. And I thank everyone for reading my first submission. It seems like a lot a of people really enjoyed it. I'm so pleased and just wanted to say thank you for taking the time to read this story. (I already have a second story available on this site, if you're interested.)
really really good. a second part is needed. the person who didnt like it should try and write their own or grow up!
anyway 100% from me :)
I loved the way you opened this up for a sequel at the very end. I would love to hear more about the mysterious Doug - how he managed to avoid being caught watching all of the whacking off. This is a daisy chain waiting to happen.
And how did he get into the car without anyone noticing?
i really loved this story, i hope you write loads more to this wonderful story. -x-