All Comments on 'First Time with a Woman'

Good story. However it could have better with details of your and her bodies to picture of yout love making.

So much potential, but development of erotic storyline felt odd in places — sharing tentative feels over the phone when Barb only gone short time to store, passionate kiss then pause, decide to shower ( together nice) followed by abbreviated bedroom scene and closing with declarations of love. That said, would love to know more about background and future.

I enjoyed it but a little cunnilingus description would have been nice :)

Simply fantastic, it sounds and feels authentic. Thanks for sharing.

I thought the story (if was just a story) it was very realistic. Thank you for your imagination and your work!