All Comments on 'First Timers Ch. 02'

by claw69

Sort by:
  • 1 Comment
bearleebearleeover 19 years ago
Better and better

Decided to read chapter 2 and this one is much better written than the first-just a little more detail this time and that helps. It's kind of hard to read this one though unless you've read the first one to know who the characters are-so story number 2 by Claw69-I'm anticipating the next one will be even better, but this was damn good.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous