All Comments on 'Fisherman's Wife Ch. 02'

by sammi_in_the_snows

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Impo_64Impo_64over 7 years ago
Even worst than part 1 and ss I said in it...

Even worst than part 1 and as I said in my comment then: "this is a short writing against all women, making them capable to whore themselves just for a few bucks"...1* (where are the negative ratings when we need them?)

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
GET A LIFE IMPO

Yet you read every word of every story every day and in form us all how bad you think the stories are.Go read some kids books for a change..This is for adults that like sex....Your comments get so old..

CHL88CHL88over 7 years ago
Well, I enjoyed it

Would like to have seen some fucking, but maybe that can come in the next chapter. Nice work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
1*

more cuck shit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Cold country

I guess you do what you need to. Our town is a fishing town, many of the menfolk are gone a lot, sometimes for weeks.

Two boats I know of take along a wife to "cook", and it seems to be different wives right along.

Lots of stuff happens around here, which I learned years ago playing in a waterfront bar band. , near as I can tell everyone knows but it doesn't get mentioned.

Tough life, every once in awhile the boat doesn't come back.

Way it is.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
99 percent of the writers on here must be closet gays and cant understand why they receive the scores they get

Gay cuck shit # 1

Impo_64Impo_64over 7 years ago
@anonymous-get a life impo

Did you found who your real father is? Or you keep looking him in your mother basement? As some other comment said: You are the one needing to get a life of your own and forget you don't know your real father...

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Boilerplate story

Storyline has been used hundreds of times . Boring after the first 10 or so.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
In Texas

In Texas we don't go for no hos in boats. Hos belong on ranches.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Do NOT write conversations as one paragraph

I don't expect professional level writing, but I do expect some evidence the writer passed grammar school level English.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
5*'s

Fantastic Cuck shit

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
1*

garbage, throw it in the trash bin

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