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Click here"Love you too darlin, I need to get back on the road while I can, I'll text when I stop."
Part two is finished and ready to be submitted.
Excellent so far. Looks like truck trouble ahead but true love will win out. Read another story on here about a Japanese girl with same condition and American boy falling in love with her.
Interesting concept/setting, poor execution.
Two major problems for me were:
1) too rigid
2) uneven/weird pacing
No buildup to anything.
After reading the introduction I was excited but I'm kinda disappointed after finishing it.
Not a bad story teller, but needs to do a bit of reasearch on details he seems to know little about, like what delivering feed is like. Nowhere in North America in the last 40 years would anyone fill up a truc, presumably with livestock feed in sacks and then spend all day dropping that one load off at various farms. What "feed" is it, car food dropped off at individual pet owners homes? A few nonfarmers with a horse might get ten sacks of feed delivered by some sor ein town but all that business aggregated across 50 states would not make up more than some fraction of one percent of the U.S. feed business. I sold off my livestock on a family-sized farm in Minnesota in 1977 and back then an average feed order would be six tons custom mixed and delivered in bulk in a single-rear-axle truck with a 350 gasoline V-8. By the late 1980s, anywhere west of the Alleghenies, it would have been 10 tons on a tandem axle straight truck with a diesel. Today, that would be a minimum even in places like Vermont, up against the Quebec border. In places like North Carolina with substantial hog farms, it would be 50 plus tons in an over-leagal-weight semi-truck.
I Loved it! Thank you for bringing in so much diversity with so much love - it makes it all the sexier and all over satisfying.
Wish you wouldn't do that, leave us with impending doom staring us in the face. But what better way than to leave the audience in suspense, waiting for the next installment.
If there were any spelling mistakes, I was so wrapped up in the story that I never saw them. This takes me back to the times I took my future wife out to some country roads and made out under the stars in the back of my pickup truck. A solid five stars, so onward to the next chapter. Thanks
One of the best I have read. Can't wait for part 2!
Hi R410a, enjoyed the story, read many of your stories in the past. Thanks for sharing. Re spelling errors, they don't really matter as my mind just autocorrects, not sure why people feel the need to comment.
Sorry, I think my comment about spellings referred to a different story.
Enjoyed the story, but I spotted two spelling mistakes: braked, not broke; rein, not reign.