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Click here"Love you too darlin, I need to get back on the road while I can, I'll text when I stop."
Part two is finished and ready to be submitted.
Excellent so far. Looks like truck trouble ahead but true love will win out. Read another story on here about a Japanese girl with same condition and American boy falling in love with her.
Interesting concept/setting, poor execution.
Two major problems for me were:
1) too rigid
2) uneven/weird pacing
No buildup to anything.
After reading the introduction I was excited but I'm kinda disappointed after finishing it.
Not a bad story teller, but needs to do a bit of reasearch on details he seems to know little about, like what delivering feed is like. Nowhere in North America in the last 40 years would anyone fill up a truc, presumably with livestock feed in sacks and then spend all day dropping that one load off at various farms. What "feed" is it, car food dropped off at individual pet owners homes? A few nonfarmers with a horse might get ten sacks of feed delivered by some sor ein town but all that business aggregated across 50 states would not make up more than some fraction of one percent of the U.S. feed business. I sold off my livestock on a family-sized farm in Minnesota in 1977 and back then an average feed order would be six tons custom mixed and delivered in bulk in a single-rear-axle truck with a 350 gasoline V-8. By the late 1980s, anywhere west of the Alleghenies, it would have been 10 tons on a tandem axle straight truck with a diesel. Today, that would be a minimum even in places like Vermont, up against the Quebec border. In places like North Carolina with substantial hog farms, it would be 50 plus tons in an over-leagal-weight semi-truck.
I Loved it! Thank you for bringing in so much diversity with so much love - it makes it all the sexier and all over satisfying.