All Comments on 'Five Days before Valentine's Day'

Wonderful story!

5

Nice story. Call me a hopeless romantic too.

Confused about the location and the reference to "high schools". That's what you have in the US, not in the UK.

Well

.. I don't see the mistakes in this one, and I gave it 5 stars also !

Suspects that's going to blow a few brain cells. Five stars.

No, not enough. What the fuck happened with Dianne? He divorced her, fine. But how did he ever come to love and respect someone so shallow and selfish and unethical? Didn't that affect her personality, her values, her behavior? She just starts fucking the boss? Yet she's worried about his mood, and doesn't connect that with her adultery? Great wrapper, but you left out the substance of why he and Helen even get a second chance.

I agree, it might negatively affect the timing of the story, but I did want to know more about Diane and her cheating.