All Comments on 'Five Into Three Does Not Go'

The sex is just scorching, whether straight, gay, or whatever. Jumping from narrator to narrator is interesting and lets us see it from all sides, but gets kind of disorienting too and might put some people off, but the sex has a wonderful breathless intensity that really swept me up and away. Good luck with it.

I personally think it's very difficult to sustain a story given all these points of view, but you managed to pull it off!! Very good sex writing and once you get used to the constant changes of view this story really isn't that hard to read! Bravo!

I love stories of a guy going femme for a good time being a woman and being fucked as a woman.