All Comments on 'Fixing Up Annie's Cabin Ch. 02'

Sounds like parts 2, 3 and possibly more are to follow. I hope! 5 stars. Thanks.

Wow, excellent stuff. I do hope there's more to come. 👍

Great! 5stars, and looking forward to more! Thank you for sharing!

A great story, I look forward to more stories from you.

Excellent story and then some. I really appreciate that the writing is really good

This chapter is an excellent follow-up to the opening chapter. The telescoping was a neat idea and led seamlessly into group sex. The descriptions of the twosomes and threesomes were physically and emotionally perfect. The house is being repaired and Jake is having the time of his life enjoying the chams of two busty females. I especially enjoyed the extended breast play as most Big Tit stories tend to ignore the tits.

I couldn’t agree more with what mitchawa wrote, especially the comment about “the extended breast play as most Big Tit stories tend to ignore the tits.” I found this refreshing and erotic too. The writing was smooth and made for an effortless read. The dialogue was spot on.

And to add that I would love to see more chapters in this fascinating romance story. The age difference need not be a deal breaker, though Annie is appropriately cautious about it. I was struck that she commented not just on the ate difference, but more on the experiential difference. Again, depends on the individuals and the dynamic they can create as well as the obvious physical attraction that they have for each other.

With the voyeur bedroom scenes, they should have had their phones turned on and in speaker mode.

This would have really enhanced the situation with full-on audio.

You've kept this going at the same great pace, still good descriptions, characters and plot.

I don't get it, what was the conflict?

excellent