by CT38
First 4 chapters were good. This one was lousy. No way he and his mom would get together. Ruined a good story.
Great story. Putting a time limit on their sexual relationships was a clever idea. It put Jake in a position where he could move forward in his adult life, while still giving him these amazing experiences with the two women he loved. Well done.
Good story. I hope for a chapter 6 where Annie finds out she is pregnant and she and Jake get married and have the honeymoon at the cabin
Liked the story line. Would like to see them reunite in a few years in the future
Lovely story. Would love a revisit when Annie is 50 and Jake is 35 (as Annie foreshadowed early iñ the story) reviewing their lives and perhaps their reconnecting from time to time. Including Mom, of course. Perhaps with threesomes involving Annie and Mom or Jake's girlfriends or wife, or perhaps one of Jake's parents dies and Annie becomes his Stepmom along with his Mom or Dad, Those would be some threesomes! At the least, the constraint of the small-town spotlight on Annie's sex life makes Jake the perfect outlet,
This has been an amazing series. I really enjoyed some of the conversations Annie and Jake had about sexuality and life. Parent/offspring incest is my least favorite genre so this chapter was a bit of a letdown for me. That said, it was well written and the threesome scenes were intense. So is this the end, or do we continue to follow Jake?