All Comments on 'Flames of Necessity Pt. 11'

end to this tedious story. Please give it up and try something different.

And seeing Li again was worth the wait. It's been an ambitious plot. I do kind of wish some characters we don't see as often, like Thelma, could be combined, am having trouble picturing what they look like. Prudence, Suzie, Li, those are good characters.

It’s been so long I thought you’d been on a world cruise, or maybe two. I do enjoy reading your stories and your style of writing. Plus, of course, the majority of ladies not being the usual “sexy young bitches” but more “normal” for mature ladies.

My only criticism, and it doesn’t just apply to you, is when a story has a lot of chapters I forget who is who sometimes. Sometimes you can get three or four chapters which are a story themselves whilst still remaining within the overall storyline. I was reading an interesting and enjoyable story but by the time it got to chapter 16 I found I wasn’t desperate to read the next chapter and then stopped reading altogether and it is now several chapters further. But I’ve lost the inclination and don’t want to go back to pick up the thread.