All Comments on 'Flash 05: A Friend Indeed'

WHEN DID CAMERON GET INVOLVED WITH CAROL'S CHRISTMAS.

Much as I like ST1956 stories, I think this one I'll have to pass.

I don't like his stories with GINGER in it. I would read if only Cameron as the MC no mention of Ginger but as I skimmed the first page Ginger's name keeps popping up so I stopped reading. I know I should get over it as this is just FICTION. Yes, I get it. Still, I can't get over HER or what she's done to Cameron.

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To be fair to my fave author, I won't rate this one.

that bitch should have gotten 20 years, also Dr A, would have been the better choice to handle Gloria.

Damn ST you did it again!! We your readers are most grateful to you for lending us once again a peek into your incredible and awesomely creative mind.

Great story as always and looking forward to many more of your wonderful reads. Thank you and KUDOS.

Excellent story!

5

I am enjoying this universe that you have created keep em coming.

Not much of a Sci-Fi fan but I like yours! Nice story and those kids are going to be a hand full growing up. Sure glad mine couldn't read my mind....still can't.....Thankfully!

Thanks ST for the entertainment. You bring pleasure to many!

Cheers

SAGE

Great story.thanks. keep it coming.

As usual, a great story. I always enjoy your works.

Awesome as always !!!!

just great gets better ,law sci fi more please.

Another fun read ST!!!!!

Really enjoyed it as always. While I appreciate it is your universe, I know you understand we get a glimpse of yours while standing in our own. Only tweak that came to my mind, if I was Bill I would've wanted to know what truly prompted Gloria to turn on me? Did she ever truly love me? Maybe a half page or so where he uses the machine to go back to her memories of when they were dating, something like that, would have added content to overall story arc. Just a thought. Thanks, as always for the great read. 5*

Kind of betwixt and between on this. As are all of ST’s stories, this was well written. But just as with the Max Burnage stories and his “command voice”, Cam’s abilities to project thoughts, read minds, etc. takes a lot of the tension out of the story. You know nothing bad is going to happen to Cam, so you don’t invest a lot in his character. It’s similar to the main characters who were Special Forces with unlimited resources.

Pretty good addition to this series, ST! I liked it.

Loved it.

Excellent! Innovative, intelligent, and clever! Thank you for your hard work and for sharing!

Fisrt off: They don't let you push when you are pregnant with twins. The stress and straining might be too hard on your heart. Multiple births are ALWAYS done via C section. Unless you're in the middle of nowhere. No hospital allow pushing for multiple births. The health risk of this can be lethal. When I read this it irked me. Cause I knew for 100% fact that's false.

I love these stories. Bring in new with the old. Hope they continue at least until the kids are 18 or 20

Another excellent story. The mix of sci-fi and LW is engaging and entertaining. Always a good read.

Love this series, ironically I just finished the last part last night , so perfect timing

Believe it or not I'm walking on air, I never thought I could be so free....

I'm enjoying this series alot. Lots of potential to keep it going and I hope you do. Thanks for sharing your talent.

This mind reading and mind bending are cool concepts. I wish you would make them suffer instead of killing them.

I have to say, you dipping your toes in sci fi stories is awesome, love this series keep up the excellent writing.

5 stars as always. Thanks.

Too bad you killed off Ross. Being Bubba's bitch would have been a better ending.

These just get better and better! More please and thanks.

At last an story this week not about cuckolds.

Need to move on to a different story line. You're turning into a one trick pony

Now that's more of a good ST story. I thought maybe we had lost you with a couple of your past stories.

Good to see the bad guys (and ladies) get their just rewards.

This is a fun series keep it going! Thank you for writing.

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Of course. ST. Another great story. I walk up every day and look for your stories. Vastly entertaining.

5+++++++++++++++++++/5!

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As always. What a great storyteller!!!

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Keep 'em comin' this a' way, ol' podnah!!

After all is said and done, this was a mere continuance of a great series.

It is street blocks away from the stereotype BTB genre,

Original, superb!

Carry on, I(we) need this type of setting everything right for the underdog once in a while.

Well done ST. Another creative submission in a difficult category to exhibit original material.

Dead on Arrival was too good for H. Ross Simpson. Living in a semi-coma for a few weeks suffering nightmares of little girls and all the bad deeds he has done. Make his last few weeks a semi-living nightmare.

wow a really good one i was thinking about another story by you the other day 5 stars again

Damn, man. I never knew a cowboy could be so incredibly creative. Thank you.

Bob on, 5*

As usual another 5 star story from my favorite Author! Thank you Sir!

@anonymous multi births,

A C-section might be needed if you're carrying twins and the leading baby is in an abnormal position or if you have triplets or more babies.

Not all twins have to be delivered by C-section.

It is a real pleasure to read your stories. You are by far the best author I can think of. Thanks for the good entertainment!

As always . . . just more of the same, exactly like the last story, and the one before that, and the one before that . . .

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My only concern is the great danger that Cam and Ginger clearly face in every story. The battles are just too evenly matched! I can't wait until the twins get a little older and make them look like minor leaguers!

I read to enjoy and I enjoyed this. Thank You

loved this and the whole series!

I love anonymous idiots like this one:

"Fisrt off: They don't let you push when you are pregnant with twins. "

Women deliver twins vaginally when it's safe. There is no rule nor mandate that Women must have a C section unless it's required due to the safety of the infants or the mother. You are speaking ENTIRELY out-of your ass.

Just ban anonymous rejects. They bring nothing to the party though the greatest American hero one was amusing.

EXCELLENCE FROM THE MASTER. 510 STARS ISN'T EVEN CLOSE...

another 5*. Sorry but I love your stories.

5* great series

Good story. Weird but still good.

Pretty durn good tale folks.

As usual, your best effort. It could have done with a little carnage, but still satisfactory. ^ stars, too short. Good one, hoss. keep it up. The Bear approves.

Well written

So much creativity and originality ie " I asked her where the kids were and she told me her folks had them for the night. I thought she wanted me to take her out, so I offered to get changed.

"That's when she told me that 'WE' weren't going out. Instead, her date was on his way to pick her up, and she would be gone most, if not all, of the night with him. Well, you could've knocked me over with a feather. We argued. I told her there was no way I was gonna put up with that.

"She told me I had no choice. Either put up with being a cuckold or she and her lover would ruin me in a divorce. Well, I told her I was not going to be her willing cuckold, and said if she left with him to not bother coming back. She laughed in my face."

.......that I just didnt feel worthy of continuing because more cliches might have been coming after that whopper.

I see why he moderates comments, its called fragility.

I thought the blood brothers ritual would transfer drops of special blood to Bill, giving him some powers. Interesting series. Thanks.

God saddletramp nobody does btb or raac better than you. And the n this series you give us mind control Greek gods AND aliens all done in that matter of fact saddletramp understatement. When this new episode flashed yesterday I took the time to sit in my favorite chair with my favorite adult beverage and reread this whole series and savor it. Then I enjoyed the new vintage here and again sat and savored. Outstanding work BUT you need to burn your editors a bit because there are some confusing grammatical errors and places where you misuse personal pronouns such that it appears you are referring to the incorrect character in the sentence.

But still epic and I look forward to an extended production run on this vintage

5 stars of course. Can’t wait to see the kids grow into their own series…

Excellent story ST1956, more please.

Scores 5/5

Excellent. Drake’s story just gets better each time.

As usual great read - can't get much better - or can it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

If twin babies are to surpass Cameron in their abilities in the future, not to mention Ginger, then it's hard to believe that Smith and Jones aliens are not involved in their appearance. Surely they pumped their purple fertile mucus into Ginger's vagina with their nonhuman hexagonal penises while they were engaged in sessions of her preparation and adaptation to the new realities of her husband... Intergalactic cuckold is cool!!!

Nice great writing

looking forward to more stories about this amazing and unusual family.

I would like some more

I haven’t read one of your stories yet that I don’t like . Please keep them coming .

Thank you

Love all of your stuff.

Ok, I'm going to be in the minority here. Firstly, this story is in the wrong category and should be in Sci Fi. Secondly, you seem to be writing the same thing over and over again, so much that they are now becoming parodies.

You write well, but I'd implore you to come up with something new and original. Different plot line and stop using the 'hit by the slut ray' trope that seems to permeate this genre. You're better than that and better than a lot of the authors of this category. I know we can all fall into a 'groove' but I implore you, try something new. With great power, comes great responsibility.

Excellent can't wait for the next one

Brilliant. Creative. Just excellent writing. Looking forward to whatever yo are cooking up. Thanks

5/5 but seemed a little tame actually. Needed a little more on Gloria and how it all started. Seems like she got of lightly....

Overall, all stories are well written. However, this series suffers from the "Superman Syndrome". Cam is so powerful (and growing) to the point where nothing is a real threat and it will take more and more efforts to introduce drama. The ability to erase an ability stole a huge source of drama from the story. Maybe it's time to shut down this storyline and introduce a character who is fumbling through the basics of his/her abilities, and can't just make problems go away.

How about a character who can read minds, has the software to search memories, but has no other capabilities. This is a source for drama and action, as he/she knows what is happening and why, has no ability to prove it to anyone else, and has to find MacGyver type solutions to defeat the bad guy(s).

Yet another great saga in Flash series--one of the best on this site! Looking forward to the next installment!

Why does Gloria deserve sympathy and not Ross?

She is the one who innated the attacks on Bill just so she could control him.

Ross just stupidly went blindly along with her. He did not start the cycle of violence against Cam and Gloria, other than talking about it as a maybe one day sorta idea. He responded to what was happening to his world.

5 stars and I like it so far.

I absolutely love your writing.

I really like your writing feels good

Great writing, loved the story line. Keep theses two and the twins going.

This entire series was so different and awesome.

Thank you so much for sharing

Saddletramp, this just may be your best series, and that is saying a lot! Love your stories. Please keep em’ coming!

5 stars.

Excellent!!! Waiting with baited breath for the next one

Fun all the way.

Hope you continue this series!

Please continue the series as the kids grow.

Add in adrestia as more active Godmother.

God, how I love your stories ❤ 💕 💖

I really enjoyed this series and would love to see it continue for a very long time.

Really enjoyed these stories

The storyline from start to finish (hope there will be more) was excellent. This could the beginning of a great series with the tale including more of the cases taken on by Cam, Ginger, Adrestia and Max, also to include their twins and what challenges they might have growing up as gifted/enhanced children. At any rate the story was excellent and very entertaining. Well Done 5+++++Stars

Well, I’ve now read all of this series and I must say that I don’t believe a word of it. LOL

Nice fantasy about not nice people/ 5*

Love all your work but this is just brilliant. A great imagination and I love some of the simple subtle jokes like the " c4apping his pants" and other suggestions he plants. I really needed a good laugh and this was definitely the medicine I needed. Hope you continue on, especially with some with the kids grown up more.

What an incredible journey you took us all on. Another top notch story. I really hope the adventure continues in some way again someday. There aren't enough stars to rate this one. Thank you for sharing your talent and eye twinkling ability.

Brilliant, more please.

Please make it more than 6 chapters, PLEASE!!!!

This is the best and most fun-to-read story I have ever read on Literotica

What hasn't been said? Outstanding story line. Great grammar and editing, as usual. Boo one passes up an ST56 STORY!! Keep writing.

XYZ

hoping to see more on the flash series, max and jop too

thank you for writing such great stories. I have greatly enjoyed every one so far. please continue this series.

Loved it, but suspended sentence for that conniving bitch?!?

I regret not commenting on each chapter. This is an incredable tale of love, hate, jealousy, and life. Impeccably written and flows freely through the pages. I envy talent and bravery such as yours. Not everyone is brave enough to write in an open for commenting situation. Just an incredable job.

This was an incredible series, couldn’t stop reading it. Would love to see more!

Really liked this series a lot. From Drake being able to forgive his wife in horrible set of circumstances, to lots of revenge on despicable people. 5 stars for the whole series