All Comments on 'Flash in the Night'

Sometimes, less is more. But, definitely need more here.

So much promise, so little delivered. At least it was short. Sorry only 3 stars.

Nice story, very realistic too.

Tess (uk)

A nice short story with a clever little twist. A few language errors/typo's at the beginning. Well done if its your first one.

You should have had the lights accidentally come back on. Her being seen completely naked after going so far out of her way to no be seen would have been the ultimate ENF.