All Comments on 'Flashing Fantasy Backfires'

Good story...nice premise, but it really could have used a re-read by you or someone else before posting. Lots of spelling errors and missed words. Hope to read more of your work in the future.

Before I finished the first chapter I knew I was reading an author who understands the concept of writing. You staged the beautiful scenes with great description, captured the emotion, had outstanding suspense building, and the twist of the missed opportunity was a gem.

Great job. I look eagerly to read the rest of your pieces.

Nice work. I enjoyed reading your story. Your characters came alive. I could relate to the young woman sitting on the bench anticipating and dreading 'the act'. I liked the way you played on both parties hesitation to go forward. The internal and external conflicts were realistic. I'm wondering if you really did something like this.

time to hit the parks