by StillStunned
5 Big Stars and a Favorite! So sensual and so well written. Loved the ending, too.
Don't normally read E&V stories, but I like this one.
PS There will be a Part 2, right? ;)
5 Stars, great job, I was rooting for him, but in the back of my mind I knew he'd get caught, guys always get caught. Thankfully she has a sexual sense of purpose and humor.
Nicely done. I'm glad he watched, any man would have, and I was glad she didn't seem to mind. Next episode should be really spicy!
Fun! Thanks for sending me here.
"For an instant it was covered in her white cream, then the water from the shower rinsed it clean."
Nice, efficient imagery. I appreciate the little "messy" touches like this and Mel sniffing the dildo. Makes it feel more like peeping on intimate private time. Though I guess the last line recontextualizes that O.o
Okay, um. Damn. Why haven't I read this sooner??? It's right up my alley lol.
Love the clifhanger ending BTW.
A highly enjoyable voyeur story. I can identify with your fascination with the mist-free mirror. It reminded me of a story my gf told me about being spied on by her young cousin. She hadn't known at the time but he confessed to her many years later when he was full of booze that he'd watched her showering through the crack in the door. He said hers were the first tits he'd seen in the flesh. She had the most superb tits I've ever seen, so I could understand his excitement.