All Comments on 'Flesh in a Mesh Ch. 01'

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elemenopeeelemenopeeover 1 year ago

This is great! Can't wait for part 2 :)

dvmrdvmrover 1 year ago

Great story, please keep it coming!

LenardSpencerLenardSpencerover 1 year ago

Is the husband retarded? These are the things a child might do. So he sends off photos of his own wife, the one he claims to love, to her friends. Ridiculous.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good start. One criticism...please keep it in the same person. The switches between I and he are distracting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

LenardSpencer, where did you see him claim to love her? He clearly was lusting for her body, not in love, and just married her to fuck her. If she had given it up before marriage he obviously would have dumped her long ago.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Looking forward to more. You laid a nice foundation. Thank you for sharing your work,

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Go go go I love the praise now time for some fuck up sex

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Ugh please I need more!!

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