All Comments on 'Flight to Paradise Ch. 04'

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PurplefizzPurplefizzover 1 year ago

Great story, although I’m not entirely sure how it’s a flight to paradise, a flight to LA yes, maybe it’s still to come. FYI just speaking personally I’d really like the ratio of plot/sex to tip in favour of plot, as opposed to sex as it is at present.

How come nobody has commented on this so far? Many thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz.

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