All Comments on 'Flight to Paradise Ch. 07'

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Anonymousalmost 4 years ago

Too much side tracking of the main plot

These characters are almost irrelevant to immersion playground and it’s just dragging.

rayirony almost 4 years ago

Anonmous below...

I'm sure our excellent author

will generously refund every penny you paid for his steamy work.

Please stop bothering us and go write something better,

but be sure to submit it anonymously!

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