All Comments on 'Fling Maybe? Ch. 04'

This is getting better and better. This chapter was perfect. Their love is true and strong. Bring on the babies and happily ever after please! In a world of gloom your story brings happiness. Thank You.

I love them

This story is better than anything I have read in a really long time! You rock!

This was remarkable! This isn't a standard stroke story or a story where the men are Nubian gods and the women are big titled bimbos who can't talk and chew gum. This is real people falling in love and bringing their baggage with them.

5 stars isn't enough.

This such a great tale and I love reading it. Do you think he can visit her in Dubai. It’s probably expensive, but worth it. Ready for more.

I've read this story three times today. It's so good. Bring on the babies and marriage please!

And her sister is disgusting, I hope she gets a nice hot dose of comeuppance!

Oh Wow, I love them so much! I love the love they have for each other and how they understand each other. This is a great story, please do not end it prematurely. Because the way you have developed the characters remind me of a real couple I know. You are an awesome writer. You remind me of another awesome writer on this site. You both have that Black Girl Magic going on!

5 stars again.

P.S. Kick Toni's Ass!

This is so beautiful. Give us more of this lovely couple.

Thanks as always for taking time to read my stories. Your feedback gives me the encouragement I need to keep writing. I have submitted the Final chapter of this story , so it should be up in a few days. Now I might do an update on Monette and Greg if it is requested, but for right now I'm moving on. Also with the final chapter I submitted a quickie of two characters that have been in my head for awhile, I might extend that story depending on the feedback. Thanks again for the read.

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