by JimBob44
absolutely loved this story. not very often I'll read a story this long but I was engrossed and couldn't wait to see what happened next. Wish you hadn't ended it the way you did and left it open to possibly another chapter.
Dude ... You're like the Jeffery Archer of erotic literature . Like most of your stories , this one , too , is AWESOME .
Transgender love, the most beautiful form of love in the world.
I love this story, it is so sweet and loving. Also, i am kinda into Fauna. She small and cute, i don't mind the scar down her back, I love the wigs. Can you make some more like this? You are great with this one. Even the other story was good but I hated those girls, Teri, Megan, Connie. I am glad some of them got pregnant, but this story was hands down better for me.
very sweet! i'm glad Scotty could love Fauna for who she was! would have like to read more scenes with him touching her & giving her head... ;)
This is a wonderful romance. It's not that erotic but enough where it belongs. I liked that Scotty ran out when he learned. I think most guys would have. I also like that after he thought about it, he decided not to let genitals get in the way of love and happiness.
Keep up the good work. I'll be rereading this again to see an example of good writing.
Boring and incompetent. "1*" !
A story with a happy ending! Fun to read. Nice character development and Fauna seemed like such a nice girl. Well done. Congrats to the author.
Wonderful story, thoroughly lovable (or hateable) characters, and some pretty hot sex. However, there are typos throughout, and a positive infestation of run-on sentences. A story this good deserves to put its best foot forward, so I respectfully suggest getting it edited and re-posting it. :)
Still and all, bravo! Going to read Pt. 2 now.
...Grammar better head to a library. Personally I'd much rather have a perfected storyline, beautifully fleshed out characters you can really care about, and topped with empathy, love, and respect. Never went to Catholic school, but if I had I would hope for such a place. I will be looking for other works from this author, this was a wonderful surprise suggestion from zetjester1, loved reading about Fauna. Cheers! --- Josie
Loved the story, not sure about the title though. Want to come up with a Flora and Fauna wordplay, just can't get there. I appreciated you giving overall happy endings.
I take my hat of to you, a wonderful story and a great read.
Thank you so much
Ha a good story going till you let it be known it was a boy.
Really need to Give some warning for that kind of shit .