All Comments on 'Fluid Dynamics'

It was obvious that this is your first story. Nothing but racial tropes and cliche from beginning to end. I skimmed through and still found it boring. What's with the racial degradation at the end? Apparently your perspective of black men is that they're brutish thugs who must dominate and humiliate white women. If she was as successful and prominent as you suggest she would not have put up with any shit like that. Piss poor first entry. 2*

You had me at Bombay Saphire

Fun story. Easy to read and I like the perspective.

Good start to your literotica career, hope you have more stories lined up?

***Thanks for the read.

Oh to be locked in a tower! Lol .... well at least in fantasy. Its nice to see another woman Lit writer. Great first story.

A feisty fun fuck, briskly told. So what if it's your first story? We all had one of those.

"I needed a large, stiff one". Stupid of me to ask did you get what you needed.