All Comments on 'Flyin the Friendly Skies Pt. 02'

by Deviana

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subpatsubpatover 5 years ago
To be continued!!!!!

Hopefully soon!!!!

Dani_KadloDani_Kadloover 5 years ago
Less of a wait this time please

Loving this series, hope we get more soon.

Danielle_CD58Danielle_CD58over 5 years ago
Great story

Loved this story - more please.

petey377petey377over 5 years ago
lovely

lovely story

CharletteCharlettealmost 2 years ago

A Transgender love story, So enjoyable !

Did I actually notice that this chapter seemed to have much better writing than the first ?

There were still a few improperly used "ANDS" as conjunctives but far less than in the first chapter.

I am so glad to see there in yet another chapter ready to enjoy.

Here We Go !

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Hi- i hope that my posts thrill you and also offer you insight to my feminine state of mind. Thank you for constructive feedback and comments. i will try my best to improve with each story.