All Comments on 'Flying Orchid Ch. 02'

Great story so far. I hope she won't be too much of a case like "be careful what you wish for".

another great story that needs several more chapters to finish it off. one other small thing, a little spell checking would be advisable..

very good so far. Be nice to see Lilly win the race. Maybe be fun little fun to see Lilly and Kate, when she in owner mode have a little sexual fling with Kate . time for the next Ch #3, it's been 11 months now, back to writing, please..

good story line, but it's time for chapter 3, you can't end this story llike this..

Liked the story, hated the way it just left you hanging at the end, really needs couple more chapters..

Why do really great story leave you hanging just when it really getting good??

terrible ending needed more

What horrible way to end the story, makes me wish I hadn’t read is! But it was such a great starting…….