All Comments on 'Following the Feeling Ch. 02'

Your story is off to a good start. I am enjoying it so far.

However, you need to proof-read your work, or get an editor. Occasionally you are leaving off words ("Taking a moment pick up Gareth's trail"), or you abruptly change tense in the middle of a sentence. It detracts from an otherwise enjoyable read.

Forget the editor forget whatever someone else is telling you what to do. Your story is great! I love this story. The way Kiera and Grey act towards each other. I love it. Maybe they could argue some more? lol Seeing them going at each other is seriously entertaining. Can't wait for another chapter asap please! :)

Someone suggesting to get an editor isn't being mean. They're simply giving advice to make the story even better than it is. And for myself, I do enjoy reading this story. However, there are just certain parts that can get confusing. For example, there were some parts of diaglogue when the lines weren't separated so it was a little confusing where Gareth stopped and Keira picked up. Those are just minor nitpicky things, that if improved, reading the story itself will become even more enjoyable than it already is. Cricketmuse, you're doing a great job with this story. The characters are wonderful and the plot is interesting. But I agree with the first poster about maybe getting an editor or something. I realize sometimes the format errors (like line breaks,new paragraphs, etc) could be caused when uploading your story on Lit so sometimes you don't see it until it's posted. Anyway, please don't see constructive criticism as bad criticism, it's simply a means to make your great story even greater. I, for one, enjoy this series and can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work!

Great start to an origonal story. I love the characters and the way that they interact. Please keep it going so that I can find out what happens! As for editing...well, there are books on the shelves with more mistakes per chapter than you have so don't worry too much if you don't want an editor. Your story will keep them reading.

Yet again, you did a wonderful job with this new chapter. Congratulations :)

Im assuming, things are going to get very interesting between our Alpha boy, and Kiera :D I honestly cant wait. Keep up with the good work.

I'm really enjoying this. Keep up the good work!

I think this is a great start to a an awesome story! i look forward to seeing where this is going to go!

very very interesting.. so far can't wait for more lots and lots more .. i hope you can get back to it soon.. would love to read it looking forward to it and keep going..

Hey Guys I just wanted to let you know that a Chapter 3 is in the approval stages. I had a formatting error which led to the delay. Thanks for your kind comments, I will try to keep up with demand!

CricketMuse

off to peruse part 3!

The story goes slowly, but interesting.

It makes the story more interesting! Granted the life of a wolf can be dire, and for the humans associated as well, but it is fun to see it lightened up a bit...

I just had to comment in response to a previous comment. I don't think it's slow. The pace is just right.

Its me agian and i have to agree with Isana i think its jus right interestin characters and u didnt bring them into fast still totally loving it

xoxo

Aria