by mindventure
Don't know how I missed this one. Very Hot! Off to read the next chapter. Five * for this one.
Excellent job. Loved the rewrite. I still have a copy of the earlier version and I see how you added them hashing out what happened and leaving us hoping for another installment. Would love to see that. I have always said that your stories all have a true note of originality in them and take off in directions that I never expect. Thank you.
Up to your usual standards. Can't wait for Chapter 2. Five stars for this one.
This could be fantasy, this could very well have been real. Either way it is one of the best stories I have read on Literotica!
Loved it! I am dying to see what the next weekend getaway holds for Lisa and Brett. I hope it is as sexy and stimulating as this one.
I hope there will be a Chapter 2 very soon. Well done -- five stars and a huge 'thank you'.