by Navyboy68
Go for it! Now that Brad has initiated him into a kiss and suck fest, and tells his farm hand that it is is turn, the young farm had can do the same to him -- namely, kiss his lips, is neck, trace his tongue through the light chest hair to the pecs, down the treasure trail, and devour Brad's cock. I see a great future time of loving and sucking, and maybe even living together on the farm! Love it!
This is a hot story; it's got a great setting and sexy characters. But the bad editing takes away from it. Fix that and you'll go from just a hot story to a VERY HOT story. I'd love to see this become all that it could be. Looking forward to part 3. MLF
Very hot! Love the skinny-dipping, sex descriptions and buildup! More chapters please!
This is a beautiful story! You did well. I could feel the emotions of the well written characters. I wish that a third chapter was available. Did this story take place around Ottawa?
Very tender, very loving man on man love story…..I am so hard thinking about the next chapter!