All Comments on 'Fooling April'

So many things so many want but are afraid. The kidnapping and rape allows to enjoy without being responsible. More chapters please.

Very well written and very enjoyable . You never know if your fantasies will become reality!!

Love the story love the peeing on each other that is my fetish to have women pee on me

If you just avoided the scat would be much better...

Well written, and the storyline was exciting! I hope this is just one installment of many.

Anonymous "f you just avoided the scat would be much better..."

Sorry, but my fantasies involve pee, so my stories will contain as much as possible.

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