by magmaman
Just goes to show that all women are lying, cheating sluts when they think they can get away with it.
I read these stories for a bit of fun and escapism...this is just total failure in being fun to read....
The simplest explanation is usually right . I don't like that option,however so I'll try to think of something more complicated & choose that one . Good story though. Once i wilfully opened it up to interpretation, it was even better. TY MGM!
MGM? This is a very well written story, of course everyone knows you can write, and write wellbut this was one of your best, and I have read a lot of your stories. Again very well done.
....nicely presented perspective and just amorphous enough to intrigue.Pro writing all the way thank-you.
This one gave me the feeling of being out of focus from beginning to
end.Of course the fact that he was ten minutes from execution appearing early in the story may have taken the punch out of it. MGM,Thank you very
much!
You held my attention all the way through. Inventive and ingenious come to mind real quick. Thank you.