All Comments on 'For All the Love in Paris Ch. 02'

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canndcanndabout 9 years ago

After such a long wait, this chapter was so short. I really wanted to see them interact and get talking. He should have stopped in the bathroom to wi;pe up the mess he made before he left. lol I hope to see more soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

I like this story do far! It has a lot of promise and I like you're writing style. The pacing is good I just wish the chapters were longer

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