by Thesexfairy
I loved the way you started the story! I want to read more, if you will please write more. The slave acts as if she wants to be punished and the master knows it. Wow! I was getting hot just reading this! ;)
I like it don't listen to first comment I thought it was hot...if you get turned off by stupid or idiot you are too sensitive to be reading stories in BDSM section
your story overall is good but for me personally calling some on stupid or idiot is a complete turn off. If that's your thing great and there's the 1st amendment but I go cold, cold cold cold there's not coming back from it.