All Comments on 'For Mistress Picked up in London'

This story was good but the spelling errors were throwing us off.

Once the story draws you in it's hard to stop! I found myself wishing I was in the story myself.

Interesting story.

Sadly there were way too many errors which were quite distracting. Need to get a proofreader.

The story also seemed to stop rather suddenly.

I think you have great potential. Keep trying.

I know there were editing errors but it did not spoil the very hot story. Hope to see the next chapter soon. 👏👏👏

I'm going to echo that 1) we need more of their story. It was a great start. 2) a proofreader or editor would really help. The errors are small but frequent enough to be distracting.

Hope to read more stories from you.