All Comments on 'For the Fate of Humanity Pt. 02'

I like this story. I would also like if you would develop the characters some more. They need to be fleshed out more. I saw this is your first story posted here. Good that you put yourself out there. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Reply to Anon

I've read your comment and worked on just that for the next part, already published today :)

Let me know if there is anything else I need to work on, as it is still my first progressive series on this site.

And thank you so much for your positivity <3