All Comments on 'For the Third Time...'

Perfectly executed. It was great to see a first time writer in the fold that so obviously carefully proofs every word. Do keep 'em coming.

Good first effort! Excelsior!

I read the story after seeing your post in the AH.

You have one major advantage over many first time authors on Lit. You can actually write. This little piece hangs together nicely, you have a fluid style which is easy to read, and you tell the story from the heart. It's a simple, straightforward tale, well told. Cudos.

Perfection!! I met my H on Lit...and it unfolded pretty much that way. :) 5 stars to you for the memories and great writing!

Fantastic loved it...AL

Amazingly well told and written. It’s easy to imagine yourself in their stead. Looking forward to more!!