All Comments on 'For Your Eyes Only'

by Mesmeri

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bdsmbillbdsmbillalmost 16 years ago
Good ending

I thought this one ended at just the right moment. Nice story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
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love the story but i really want to kill you for stoping RIGHT THERE!!!! the way you lead the story was good and well thought out... but you still suck for ending it right there. i cant wait for the next installment!

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I'm now also publishing erotic stories on Smashwords under the pen name Jane Mesmeri. If you like what I've posted here, you might want to check me out.