All Comments on 'Forbidden Ch. 16'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
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More and wonderful story. Want to find if Priya is pregnant and if she Matthew get together and live happily ever after.

DarkrSideDarkrSideabout 3 years ago

Of all the series of stories on Lit, this is the one I look forward to the most for the next chapter. Good job with another romantic and passionate chapter

virdukvirdukabout 3 years ago

Looking forward to her getting pregnant and it detonating the whole family and those two having to flee to their own lives.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
at last!

It has been a while since a chapter of this story has been posted, but the wait has been worth it. We have in this chapter a wonderful and touching love encounter between the two main characters. While rather too short, this is arguably the finest chapter yet in this story, and fully deserves a five star rating.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Question for author

I think you mentioned in your bio and elsewhere that some characters in your stories are inspired from others. So where is the inspiration for Priya from?

And if you know an Indian woman, you are a lucky dog. Indian women, especially in the Western countries worship white men. Love nailing those whitewashed brown whores

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