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Anonymousabout 3 years ago

superb

What is really a glorious love story continues in Chapter 17 of Forbidden, beautifully written by the author. That this chapter continues from the previous one in an uninterrupted narrative accounts for what would otherwise be disappointing in its brevity. Five stars.

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