All Comments on 'Forbidden Ch. 24'

Seems I stumbled on this story late. I am not a West Indian Woman, but an East Indian Woman. This story reminds me of some of my own encounters with white guys.

The contrast of the skin colour, and the relative taboo of it.

Indian women adore white guys.

This is more of a love story than anything else, and, as always, the writing is amazing. The author has crafted an excellent plot with well-defined characters and a marvelous descriptive narrative which is a pleasure to read. Even those who dislike the cheating aspect of this story can appreciate the quality of the writing. (The author's stories that are to be found on Amazon are also amazing). Five stars for this submission.

Wow, thank you very much! And thanks for the plug

LOVE THIS STORY. X-FACTOR does it again! keep it going, keep it many chapters as possible. your doing great!

I love the story between the love and attraction between the two. I read all of the chapters and have to say on the best stories by far. Please continue.

One the best writers came across. this feels real

what a great read. 3 chapter? wow certainly can go further. best story imo

I agree, the writing is amazing. love the anal read. Wish this story can continue further. So many ways this can go continue, please. X-Factor has done it again

then culmination of love n passion n most of all detailed every sex scene very clear n hot. Priya is one wild one, shame only 3 chp left it has ability for further more chptrs. One of my fav authors n top read

Suprb!!!!!

tremendous series so far. capturing the essence of love and affection. Series can go as many chapters keep it up

Please More...........

one of my favorite series. cant stop reading. latest chapter mind blowing. make her pregnant..I agree with others dont stop the series keep it going best series out by far

Loved it. 5 star.

x-factor you have done it again. Very loving and illustrated sexy story. We want more please continue into various chapters. This story can go many ways, of her getting pregnant, sex while pregnant, raising kids. getting married,

Very hot

love at its finest, this can continue with other chapters different scenarios. Loving the description of sexual pleasure between two adults

Great story between two passionate couples. Awaiting next chapter xfactor is one of the best writer keep them

coming

5 Star rating. Great passionate reading

One of the best writers. 2nd time re-reading all chapters. agreed, keep the stories coming

Keep it coming

Absolutely perfect reading for women or couples to get the creativity and juices flowing.

keep it going love the love scenes

Wow 5

Never cared much for anal till now because the male used her vagina for the giving of his seed. Beautifully done. Again!