All Comments on 'Forbidden Demand Ch. 03'

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EZ8ltEZ8ltover 2 years ago

Why do I feel I won't like the next chapter and you'll bringe a third party into this.

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcover 2 years ago

Some of the language issues are becoming more of a distraction. The story continues to over emphasize sex at the expense of any meaningful character development. The strokers will love it but the discerning eye insists on more if you're looking for respect...3*

dault3883dault3883over 2 years ago

when are you going to post chapter 4 in english? you have it posted in the other language

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