All Comments on 'Forbidden Fruit'

THAT THERE IS A LOT MORE CHAPTERS TO THIS BEAUTIFUL WRITTEN STORY...! BETTY jo xoxo

Please continue!

Thanks Notbreckenridge . Yes enjoyed the read . It has a nice flow to it .

After 30 plus years in lab research , I have become rather detail oriented . Might we hope that some background on Amber's actual Mom could be added . Chrystal is no doubt the feminine influence in Amber's life ergo the mother . But She would be the sire in the pregnancy .However wouldn't there have been a need for an ovum and womb for conception and gestation ? So ... divorce ?? untimely demise ??

A very well written story. This is how people should be open to new experience

good story as the others you have wrote a second chapter to this one would nice 5 stars

Thanks for writing this one, I really enjoyed it and hope that the characters get another outing.

I found it to be a good start I hope there is more to the story.

Wrong equipment

Lovely story. Wonderful introduction to tgirl love. Thank you for sharing this.

Honestly, this makes me really wish for a sequel where the main character gets feminized because they realize that they're more like Amber and Crystal than they thought they were. 5/5

Love to see a lovely and kind shemale. It is very rare. And of course, a shemale mother, I hope we can see more about the characters.

I may have caught a cucumber between my legs once or twice or at least soften the fall with the top of my foot. If I correctly guess which grocery store chain you worked in the produce department for will you write a Chapter 2?

Ralphs...I'll be waiting....

I'd love a sequel. Great read.

A really superb first-time (in more ways than one!) story. Tender and caring, yet hot and sexy, too. Adding Mom was a good addition. She was assertive, without being too dominating. I vote with the others who'd like to see a continuation of this wonderful story.

And LiterKnight's suggestion of feminizing the guy (I wish you'd have named him) would absolutely ruin the story. LiterKnight needs to go write his own story, if he wants feminization.

I’m sorry I can’t give you 6 stars. What a great story. Well done

I identify with the daughter. I'm a crossdressing Sissy, a Bottom. And my boyfriend always fucks me bareback and cums up my ass. I love getting fucked and we do it a LOT but, once in a while he likes me to fuck him. It feels great but I love getting fucked even more! However, I would really like to try a sandwich with me in the middle. I would love to feel my cock up a guys ass while my Boyfriend fucks me!

I agree with Cabl3, this story NEEDS a sequel!

Oh, and BTW, a good stout is better than an IPA. If you can see light through the glass or mug, it is to weak. :P

this definetly needs a sequel

Just discovered this magnificent story, Others have asked for a sequel. Please add me to the request queue,

xoxo,

Di

Nicely written, not too over the top for my taste, just right. Thank you!!

A creative story. Amber being like an inexperienced schoolgirl, and the two of them making out in an innocent, sweet, way. Well done.

I agree with previous comments, the tender make out sessions were well done and this definitely needs a follow-on chapter.

I thought it was good. I think it would have been better if you would have left the mother/father (man this is complicated) out of it and had her seduce him in another chapter, causing some sort of dichotomy for our hero.

I was thrown by the following sentence and I had to read it about 10 times: "I almost jumped but couldn't got anywhere now that I was locked between two women."

Great job, 5 stars.

Absolutely bloody fantastic… thank you

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I’ve had such a sweet tooth lately, craving stories that make me go “aww” as I’m getting heated up. This was perfect!

I love this story although the build up was slightly strung out it was enjoyable. I would luv this to happen to me although I am attached & she doesn’t know or would approve of my fantasy & desire to make luv to & be made luv to by one or more trannies. It’s got me so hard I’m looking forward to reading the next instalment soon.

I'm David I loved the storie I'm 59 from 1990 been severing dominant mistresses and for the first time I loved to have my virginity all holes taken so bad I live in harwichport 7742162077 if in Massachusetts and can help my new fantasy

Awwwww, Loved it from start to finish. The nice guy finished first

Sweet story. I liked the innocent dates and the slow build up before they get intimate. Not sure how I feel about Crystal joining in their fun time though. She's an attractive assertive woman, so I'm not sure why she would want to involve herself with her daughter's boyfriend. On to the next part!