by capn_doggy
So your structure and word use is great but, way to little character reasoning for the demon? Lady was explained, so all of her actions seemed contradictory to her stated love for Sydney and I was just left confused at the end
Second reading while eagerly wait and check back to see if you release anything else
I really enjoyed this story hope you either show us one of those ideas or return to this story soon
A good start -- especially for a first published work -- opening up possibilities and potential. Looking forward to where it goes.
I despise stories like these, I wasted time reading your story when you could have prevented that by putting a warning at the top of the page.
The story is already tagged male-to-female, and if you don’t check the tags of a story before you read it, it’s your own goddamn fault, not the author’s. Get your head out of your ass before it gets stuck there forever.
This story eventually made me realize that I’m trans.
This has to be the tenth time I have read this and I love it every single time. This is one of my few go to stories when I need cheering up.
If this truly is your first, I recommend to look at "Finding Faith" and "Testing Faith" both by A.C.Adams on Amazon. Hers are true masterpieces along similar lines. Learn from her and you will find a lot more within yourself. I think you'd be great.
this was amazing. just enough detail feathered about the plot to highlight the mystery of the overall and hints of a deeper soul-truth emerging at the end.
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