All Comments on 'Forced Changes'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Interesting

Would like to see another chapter where you fill in the gaps.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Awesome

Would love to see more chapters, I hope you continue the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
GOD SAKE

I hate it when my smut makes me emotional...

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
its good but. . .

So your structure and word use is great but, way to little character reasoning for the demon? Lady was explained, so all of her actions seemed contradictory to her stated love for Sydney and I was just left confused at the end

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Second reading while eagerly wait and check back to see if you release anything else

I really enjoyed this story hope you either show us one of those ideas or return to this story soon

EugeneSelfishEugeneSelfishabout 5 years ago
Intriguing

A good start -- especially for a first published work -- opening up possibilities and potential. Looking forward to where it goes.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Use a warning for gender bending

I despise stories like these, I wasted time reading your story when you could have prevented that by putting a warning at the top of the page.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
F**k you anon

The story is already tagged male-to-female, and if you don’t check the tags of a story before you read it, it’s your own goddamn fault, not the author’s. Get your head out of your ass before it gets stuck there forever.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Made me realize I’m trans.

This story eventually made me realize that I’m trans.

nyteramblernyteramblerover 3 years ago

Thought it was funny and corny but a good story.thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This has to be the tenth time I have read this and I love it every single time. This is one of my few go to stories when I need cheering up.

WillmottWillmottabout 1 year ago

Disgusting. Put warnings.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

If this truly is your first, I recommend to look at "Finding Faith" and "Testing Faith" both by A.C.Adams on Amazon. Hers are true masterpieces along similar lines. Learn from her and you will find a lot more within yourself. I think you'd be great.

DelsetDelset9 months ago

this was amazing. just enough detail feathered about the plot to highlight the mystery of the overall and hints of a deeper soul-truth emerging at the end.

<3

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

what if the fuck is happening, can someone explain?

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