All Comments on 'Forced into Prostitution Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Bravo!

I really like the way you tell a story. Hope you continue Jill's story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Excellent

Keep them coming. Once I started reading I couldn't stop.

MitchFraellMitchFraellover 9 years ago
Very good

A compelling story. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Cool

Cool! Good idea and plot, well written. Hope you will continue this story. Keep writing.

badmanmoosebadmanmooseover 9 years ago
Nice Story...but

You lost me with the ending. I thought you were going to have her show him the cum so he would know what she had been through

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Fantastic

I loved the whole storey and your skill in telling it.

I was supprised by the end.

Please keep it up.

Chief3BlanketChief3Blanketover 9 years ago

As the husband is the one that got in the financial mess poor Jill should have insisted he work as a homosexual prodtitute. He deserved to be sodimized over and over.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Language

Why does a so-called middle class English lady speak like an American?

OneShotOneOneShotOneover 9 years ago
Please keep writing

Your stories of middle class middle aged women in distress are wonderfully erotic. You captured Jill's torment beautifully.

Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great work

Great work love these two stories. Hope there is another soon :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

To be honest the last part didn't surprise me at all I knew from the beginning she was pissed but the fact that she still was the one to prostitute herself was a surprise

tatlockstatlocksover 9 years ago
Yep....

Great story and nice conclusion. Very well done.

GoodhueGoodhuealmost 8 years ago
The Skank Fucked Frank!

- The twat finally lost it and let hubby Alan know that the mess between her legs was because of the financial mess he'd created!

- Even though she'd earned enough to cover the payments her husband owed,I'll bet that she'll finally realize that she likes the sex a hell of a lot more than the little her husband gives her!

- After fucking hundreds of men,she renames her gaping pussy, " The Lincoln Tunnel" and adds a $20 toll for entering to her $80 fuck fee.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
good work

this chapter is even better than the first.

Volume51Volume51almost 7 years ago
Good Story even believable

Well written and structured. Thanks

ThomasLordThomasLordover 6 years ago
Good Story

I really enjoyed the story. Good, believes l'd plot. The only improvement I would suggest is that the husband disappeared for a day. Having Jill needing to avoid him with her bruised tits and sexy clothes would've added to her plight.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
You did good

Not bad young lady not bad

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I thought it was great!! Totally hot, made me want you so bad! Thank you

Sweetnothings77Sweetnothings77over 2 years ago

I liked the story cause its true in a way. Not sure where you get the idea or know how it goes but it does happen like that when we womens start spreading our legs like that for different Mens to get with us we cant always be so picky. A Punter or a John is just another Sex act for Money. I learned like Jill. You DO what the Man wants and how he wants and the only thing you can say is how much you Want to Do IT for.

DesertPeteDesertPeteover 2 years ago

Excellent story; well written and very arousing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

That is hot.

I would love to lick WY wifes pussy clean after that. I would also rim her ass and taste the cum on her lips

ruiarodriguesruiarodriguesabout 1 year ago

Nice touch for the finale... Let see if he likes it.

Good writing describing Jill's thoughts when facing each John.

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