by fannyrat
I really like the way you tell a story. Hope you continue Jill's story.
Cool! Good idea and plot, well written. Hope you will continue this story. Keep writing.
You lost me with the ending. I thought you were going to have her show him the cum so he would know what she had been through
I loved the whole storey and your skill in telling it.
I was supprised by the end.
Please keep it up.
As the husband is the one that got in the financial mess poor Jill should have insisted he work as a homosexual prodtitute. He deserved to be sodimized over and over.
Why does a so-called middle class English lady speak like an American?
Your stories of middle class middle aged women in distress are wonderfully erotic. You captured Jill's torment beautifully.
Thanks for sharing.
To be honest the last part didn't surprise me at all I knew from the beginning she was pissed but the fact that she still was the one to prostitute herself was a surprise
- The twat finally lost it and let hubby Alan know that the mess between her legs was because of the financial mess he'd created!
- Even though she'd earned enough to cover the payments her husband owed,I'll bet that she'll finally realize that she likes the sex a hell of a lot more than the little her husband gives her!
- After fucking hundreds of men,she renames her gaping pussy, " The Lincoln Tunnel" and adds a $20 toll for entering to her $80 fuck fee.
I really enjoyed the story. Good, believes l'd plot. The only improvement I would suggest is that the husband disappeared for a day. Having Jill needing to avoid him with her bruised tits and sexy clothes would've added to her plight.
I liked the story cause its true in a way. Not sure where you get the idea or know how it goes but it does happen like that when we womens start spreading our legs like that for different Mens to get with us we cant always be so picky. A Punter or a John is just another Sex act for Money. I learned like Jill. You DO what the Man wants and how he wants and the only thing you can say is how much you Want to Do IT for.
That is hot.
I would love to lick WY wifes pussy clean after that. I would also rim her ass and taste the cum on her lips
Nice touch for the finale... Let see if he likes it.
Good writing describing Jill's thoughts when facing each John.