by dreamin101
I just finished reading all 8 chapters and I have 2 questions (really a question and and a comment:):
1) who is the revenge against? According to Laura, he left her not the other way around. Was he forced to leaver her?
2) Could you make the chapters a little longer? 1 page is not enough (3 is too many, 1&1/2 - 2 is just right.
Please keep writing , I am really enjoying this story