All Comments on 'Forget Me Not Ch. 08'

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WhackdoodleWhackdoodlealmost 9 years ago
Why not just bite his cock off?

That would be the end of Dalton.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Oh no

Please keep the story going! We waited so long for this!

Phil_PatsfanPhil_Patsfanalmost 9 years ago
So \far it's a really goood story but.....

I just finished reading all 8 chapters and I have 2 questions (really a question and and a comment:):

1) who is the revenge against? According to Laura, he left her not the other way around. Was he forced to leaver her?

2) Could you make the chapters a little longer? 1 page is not enough (3 is too many, 1&1/2 - 2 is just right.

Please keep writing , I am really enjoying this story

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