All Comments on 'Forgive Me, Father'

Nicely written with an unexpected ending. I'm not sure a priest would need all of the details of the first voyeuristic experience but the rest of the story makes up for it. A good read.

You surprised me very well at the end -- it's an unexpected and chilling bit that counteracts the sex. It's definitely not fitting the mould of many stories on here, but that is precisely what makes it an excellent piece of work. Congratulations!