All Comments on 'Forgotten Links'

A very nicly written story.... but i do wonder if there will be a chapter 2....plz continue. :)

This is 1 story that MUST have a chapter2. Im hooked.

This composition is quite glorious, dominant and powerful in its lusty spell. Everything is true to its nature, the beast, the demons, the loss. Dreamer that you are, you made this normal situation sparkle in its intensity and magic. Then again, how could it not,(they're both entities.) You, however, managed to bring out their forces. Please delete the clique line of, it felt like hours, but was really minutes, the reality of time intruded on the sexual act they were commiting. I'd say this looks promising, but it annoyed me when little words like as, were being ignored. Go over this again, and fill in those words! I just kept laughing when it was over. I couldn't wait to see the aftermath! The morning's rays will not lighten the tantrums and wailings of her, and the cussing of him. No matter how intelligant they may be, sleep will cause them disarray, and both will wake up with jumbled thoughts, and will be prone to accusation. Hopefully they will awake at the same moment to heighten the fun, ahem, fight. Make my day, if they're going to be a couple, write about their univitable squabble. I thank thee.