All Comments on 'Forgotten Lunches Ch. 02'

loved it, hoping for a part 3

Good story, both part 1 and 2, really enjoyed the two mains and their supporting casts. Good flow, there is no real hurry and you make that work.

Cannot give a 5, but definitely better than a 4, so no score at the moment. I would not want to pull down the score from people who might love it.

Usage of "myself" needs a bit of work, as well as "yea" vs. "yeah."

Keep up the good work! I know you have not been active in about a year and a half, but I hope you still enjoy writing.

Good follow up!

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