All Comments on 'Forgotten Siblings Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Liking where it’s going

This would have been unbelievable, unbearable, intense, and I too would have been unsure what to do but would hope.

Omart57Omart57over 4 years ago
lithguy -

You are torturing us! I love it but please, please, Finish us !?! Them, I meant them. poor kids! lol.

Shawna1138Shawna1138over 4 years ago

I love it the intensity the building up keep going

sabra16023sabra16023over 4 years ago
I'm Hooked

You have me hooked on the story. You have to finish it. Thanks

starfight22starfight22over 4 years ago
Good, but very long built up.

Like your style, but the built up takes ages. Plus, now with parents back, how should this continue without them noticing?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Good one 5 stars

So much for the vegan comment about sister was in the first chapter.

AirSearch1AirSearch1over 4 years ago
Love it

Please post atleast a chapter 3 for this story. I want to see these two have some real fun.

lithguylithguyover 4 years agoAuthor
More coming soon!

I just sent in chapter 3. It should get approved and published in 2-3 days. I hope you enjoy it! I think it's about time they have some real fun ;)

cindyp1976cindyp1976over 4 years ago
So hot

Keep writing

LibertyMarshmellow98LibertyMarshmellow98almost 4 years ago

Really really enjoyed this! The back and forth teasing is amazing although I think Chrissy is totally winning. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

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