All Comments on 'Fortune and Fortitude Pt. 04'

Hi Lerena, Welcome back to sharing your story of Jared and Quinn. Keep up the good writing! I like the first 4 chapters.

Lerena, I am glad your back. I am looking forward to more FF. Actually I am looking forward to your other stories as well, Law of the Glork and rebirth. I am hooked on all 3. You are a good story teller. I hope to see more soon.

Lerena, I just found your work and binged FF! Keep up the great writing and I look forward to seeing more.

Glad to see you’re back really enjoyed the story keep up the great work. Thanks very much for your time imagination and creativity is greatly appreciated five ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Really uneventful chapter. Definitely below average in quality.

Ok so the main character is not just hung up on his religious morals he also is a complete moron… Perfect. “Hey I know my life is in danger for what I am, so I’ll call random numbers and tell everyone who I am and who my father is surely that can’t get me in to trouble.”

Like the story so far other than a growing dislike of the main character, I think it’s good. Question if the other demons became vassals why are they not staying with Seguin as well?

I think this story has great potential, but you are killing it with make the main character so dumb. I am not sure what the point of that is. It's quickly making the story unreadable. I hope you correct this soon somehow.