by Lerena
Having read it yet but just wanted to say really a treat to see an update from ya and hope to see more!
Welp finally finished the chapter and damn what a tease. Looking forward to 8 and hope it comes quickly! 5 stars.
Well done.
If I were to suggest things, I'd suggest Quinn seduce Zoe into helping her enjoy Jared. Perhaps Kiara and Quinn noticing the jealousy, and determined to help eliminate it.
Glad to see you back. Your writing is incredible in this story and 'Law of Glork'.
Once I get into a longer series, I find myself sometimes skipping the sex scenes so I can follow the stories. Yours are original and titillating enough that I don't do that. Great job.
Yet another awesome chapter. Thank you very much for continuing the story absolutely loving it five stars. and two thumbs up ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👍👍
Your characters are so interesting and varied. Really enjoying their interactions. Looking forward to reading more.
Erf! Now I need to add another name to keep track of...
Eagerly await your next chapter...
I am really enjoying your work!! I honestly don't want to give you ideas where to go because I am enjoying what you're imagining more than if I gave you ideas. Please continue the story! This story has lots of promise to become a very drawn out long term effort as you're still in the initial stages of the complete tale should you chose to continue past the apocalypse and into the shaping of the new world order which I would greatly enjoy. Thanks for the enjoyment your story has given me and I look forward to future chapters.😇
Great story! Please keep going. 5*
With Jared’s activities feeding the girls in the bedroom, perhaps the smell and energy will reawaken and wet Sanguine ‘s appetite.
Some bonding between the girls would be nice also.
Really enjoying this story and where it's going. Please keep it going. I found it via a reading recommendation from one of the many discord channels I'm on.
This has been really great. I'm glad you picked this story back up. It'll be interesting to see when/ if Zoe ever reveals to anyone other than Kiara the reason for her jealousy. Looking forward to Annika next, but I hope you keep to the good balance you have of Relationship Development (not necessarily with new characters) and Plot Development.
Tbh, the only thing that’s bothering me in the story is the mc. The mopey teen angst thing is killing me.