All Comments on 'Fortune and Fortitude Pt. 07'

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Sl33pingforestSl33pingforest6 months ago

Having read it yet but just wanted to say really a treat to see an update from ya and hope to see more!

Sl33pingforestSl33pingforest6 months ago

Welp finally finished the chapter and damn what a tease. Looking forward to 8 and hope it comes quickly! 5 stars.

traskentrasken6 months ago

Well done.

If I were to suggest things, I'd suggest Quinn seduce Zoe into helping her enjoy Jared. Perhaps Kiara and Quinn noticing the jealousy, and determined to help eliminate it.

DommeCatDommeCat6 months ago

Glad to see you back. Your writing is incredible in this story and 'Law of Glork'.

RolwageRolwage6 months ago

6 star worthy.

Thank you so much.

NkwaziNkwazi6 months ago

Once I get into a longer series, I find myself sometimes skipping the sex scenes so I can follow the stories. Yours are original and titillating enough that I don't do that. Great job.

oldmanbill69oldmanbill696 months ago

Very enjoyable story !

buddah222buddah2226 months ago

Yet another awesome chapter. Thank you very much for continuing the story absolutely loving it five stars. and two thumbs up ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👍👍

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Your characters are so interesting and varied. Really enjoying their interactions. Looking forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Hopefully we will not have to wait 14 months for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Good to see another chapter. Hope to see more soon

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Keep it going. Thanks for the story and continuation.

AmbivalenceAmbivalence5 months ago

Erf! Now I need to add another name to keep track of...

Eagerly await your next chapter...

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I am really enjoying your work!! I honestly don't want to give you ideas where to go because I am enjoying what you're imagining more than if I gave you ideas. Please continue the story! This story has lots of promise to become a very drawn out long term effort as you're still in the initial stages of the complete tale should you chose to continue past the apocalypse and into the shaping of the new world order which I would greatly enjoy. Thanks for the enjoyment your story has given me and I look forward to future chapters.😇

WatcherNtheSlyWatcherNtheSly4 months ago

How long til his mother gets brought into the harem?

David_BrockDavid_Brock4 months ago

Honestly, Jared can be SUCH an idiot. LOL!!!!!! Too fucking funny!

Teufel67Teufel673 months ago

Great story! Please keep going. 5*

With Jared’s activities feeding the girls in the bedroom, perhaps the smell and energy will reawaken and wet Sanguine ‘s appetite.

Some bonding between the girls would be nice also.

BlueJKBlueJK3 months ago

Really enjoying this story and where it's going. Please keep it going. I found it via a reading recommendation from one of the many discord channels I'm on.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

This has been really great. I'm glad you picked this story back up. It'll be interesting to see when/ if Zoe ever reveals to anyone other than Kiara the reason for her jealousy. Looking forward to Annika next, but I hope you keep to the good balance you have of Relationship Development (not necessarily with new characters) and Plot Development.

NovemberComingFireNovemberComingFire5 days ago

Tbh, the only thing that’s bothering me in the story is the mc. The mopey teen angst thing is killing me.

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