by deployednudist
Great for a first story. Decent scene descriptions but could have used a bit more verbiage. Still gave 5 stars. Just keep on writing. Maybe a part 2 to this one? It deserves it.
Nice story. But wrong category, no incest. Swinging really isn’t taboo either. And is ‘J’ size tits a thing? Looking at a cup size chart, I guess it is. That poor woman is going to have serious back problems hauling those jugs around.
Loved your story. It brought back many memories of the Mon Chalet. Love that place!!
Some strange stroke story decisions: condoms (do fictional characters get pregnant or contract diseases?); awkwardness around parents in sexual situations; freak bra sizes.
These factors are getting in the way of eroticism.