All Comments on 'Found What We Were Looking For'

Excellent! From your neighbors!

This is a good start for a story, but what is here is incomplete.

This was the source of fond memories... been there, done that. Thanks for reminding me. Well done

You posted the same story today with the title, "Surprised From Next Door".

Excellent. We often fantasized about swinging when we fucked, and my husband arranged for it to happen while we were on vacation in Galveston, Texas. It was glorious, and we now have several "adventures" every year. Keep writing!

Oh dear.

Very poor. You just jump straight in to your "story" like an overexcited teenager in his first fuck. Totally unbelievable. Fantasy only works when it has an element of possibility - this doesn't. Take your time and give the reader a bit of foreplay; build up the pace. The hastily sketched, improbable "background" doesn't help.

And bonfire is one word, not two.

Nice story, well told, has a real ring of truth to it. Do you think the ladies set you up at all? Afterall, they talk as we know, and could've set it up on the side earlier in the evening. What a wonderful, organic way to begin sharing.

Just watch, the scum buckets will crawl out from under their rocks and find something wrong about this. Pretty soon, whackdoodle, iameasel, impo64, justwords, and all of his other names will start calling it garbage and cuck shit.

Written more like a hornyjunior.

Loved your story - just plain sexy fun...not a bad thing at all for a senior couple. No jealousy, no domination or submission, no rough sex. Two loving couples spicing up their lives. I hope it carried on to more.

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